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Subject:Can I have this dance for the rest of my life?
Time:02:42 pm
Choose three completed stories you've done, and list at least one thing about each you wish you would've done differently when you wrote it.


Point of Impact (not 'complete', but I'll never add any more to it)- what I consider the absolute worst of my fics since '03. That's generally what I split my fics into - '01-'03 and 04-present. Aisha was just...really, really hard to write. I can't get into many female character's heads, and Aisha is such an old-school, very good and righteous but in a nice way kind of girl. She didn't seem like the right person to put in the antagonist position.

Plus, looking at two guys together in a bed - you're not going to mistake one of them for a girl. Unless he's Davey Havok or Ed Byrne or something.


Childhood - I really, really had an idea for this one. And it just didn't get to where I wanted it to get to. I wanted this child, Z, to look at Jack as an outsider. Someone from a bad home but with shelter and probabilities of food, looking at this dirty, ratty, older boy with absolutely no guarantees. And it focused a lot more on the reality of the streets - which is alright, I suppose, just not what I wanted - than Jack.


Intermission - I like this fic. I really do, if only because I'm pretty sure it's the only threesome fic outside of Angel and Kiko's Team SWAT ( :D ) especially Ninja Storm. But it ends awkwardly, and the conversation in the middle is not what I pictured it would end up as. Dustin was channeling Bridge. It was a little disconcerting.


angel_negra said that this may have been the hardest meme she's done; this is probably my easiest, including the ones where you just type your name and it generates weird answers. That may or may not have something to do with an inferiority complex.
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